Essay Comments

I believe that my Hamlet essay shows good signs of improvement in my writing. There were very few errors in my essay; however, I could have read through my essay a few more times to improve my essay even more. One thing that would help me improve my writing would be to start drafting my essay earlier. And another would be to connect my body paragraphs through topic and closing sentences. Also in my next essay I will consider using a topic based rather than character based organization for each body paragraph. Finally, including a more specific analysis that connect more closely with the prompt will help me improve my writing.